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Re: Princess of the Blood.
I read this before and didn't get a chance to comment. The interaction between Qatar and Al-Fayed made me chuckle both times, and I liked how you already introduced conflict ...
Jul 30, 2006 -
Re: pleased to meet you all...
Hello, Zankoku! Welcome to YWS. My name is Jacquie, and if you have any questions, feel free to PM me and I'd love to help. :D Zankoku, don't hesitate to ...
Jul 30, 2006 -
Re: Hello, I am ... Figminti!
Fig/Figgi/Figgi/jfudfnfdnhfojv/Figminti, I am Haux. Welcome to the great YWS. Have lots of fun. :D ~Jacquie~
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: Newbie here
Welcome to YWS! It's always exciting to have a new writer here. :D You're in the right place, Nagem. Most everyone is constructive and friendly, and we all like to ...
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: Newbie here
Welcome to YWS! It's always exciting to have a new writer here. :D You're in the right place, Nagem. Most everyone is constructive and friendly, and we all like to ...
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: Another portrait! Go on, give it a look...free gloves!
Hey, nice! Great contrasts with your shading. :D I hope you can find a way to smooth out the background...All the pencil lines show up. But I know you haven't ...
Apr 28, 2006 -
Re: Its been a long time...
Yeah, I remember you mostly from debate here, too. I think I might have read a story you posted. You probably don't know me though. Welcome back anyway! ~Jacquie~
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: Prologue of Life's Story
Harsh critiques, eh? Since you requested it, I'll do m'best. First, the little typos and such: Half way I'd put a hyphen in between, or make it one word. In ...
Apr 19, 2006 -
Re: Why Ch. 13
Wow, I see you've done a lot of work on this chapter. A lot of rewriting. I like this! :D Let me tell you first that you're a very good ...
Apr 17, 2006 -
Re: Family Secret
Thank you all so much for your comments! I'll sort all that out soon...particularly the numerous typos--yikes!. ~Jacquie~
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: I Am You...
I am you… your mind. Wow! Superb last line, bandhu! How true, too. :D I'm not very experienced with poetry either; I've never really tried it, but I've heard you ...
Apr 14, 2006 -
Re: Hello...
Hi! Welcome, welcome, welcome! If you've got any questions, feel free to PM anyone you like. :D And have lots of fun! Jacquie
Apr 8, 2006 -
Re: New Person coming through! :)
Oh-- Oh! Another Texan gal! Living in...Georgia? :? How'd you end up there? :P Welcome to YWS, Jc! So very happy to meetcha! My name's Jacquie. If you need any ...
Mar 24, 2006 -
Re: Hello..
Hey, Shimmer! I'm Jacquie. Welcome to YWS! I've only written essays in school, but since you enjoy it, I'll have to try it sometime. Have fun! ~Jacquie~
Mar 23, 2006 -
Re: hi
Hey, Teo! Glad you're here at YWS! Hope you have fun! ~Jacquie~
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